the diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
The diagram shows the
process
by which the Use synonyms
sugar
is produced from Use synonyms
sugar
cane, comprising 7 distinct stages.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
process
starts with growing the Use synonyms
sugar
cane and ends when the Use synonyms
sugar
is ready for sale. Use synonyms
This
includes growing, harvesting, crushing, purification, evaporation, centrifugation and Linking Words
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last
, drying and cooling.
To commence with, Change the word
lastly
first,
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sugar
cane is farmed and Use synonyms
nurished
for about 12 to 18 months, which is the longest period in the whole Correct your spelling
nourished
process
. Use synonyms
Second,
the sugarcane is harvested by means of two ways, either manually or using vehicles Linking Words
such
as tractors. Linking Words
Third,
The harvested Linking Words
sugar
is put in a machine for crushing and a liquid that comes out is called Use synonyms
juice
. The fourth step involves purifying the Use synonyms
juice
using an equipment called a limestone filter.
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Subsequently
, the purified Linking Words
juice
is put on a high flame in an evaporator, and Use synonyms
thus
, through the evaporation Linking Words
process
Use synonyms
juice
is converted to syrup. Sixth, using a centrifuge, a circular tool, Use synonyms
sugar
crystals are separated from the Use synonyms
sugar
. Once that Use synonyms
happened
, the Wrong verb form
happens
sugar
is taken into the Use synonyms
last
phase of drying and cooling, which Linking Words
finalise
the Correct subject-verb agreement
finalises
process
and Use synonyms
produce
Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
sugar
ready for sale.Use synonyms
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