Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate involving whether

governments

should

support

creative

artists

financially.

While

it is reasonable for

governments

to

support

artists

, I do believe they can be funded by other channels. On the one hand,

governments

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support

for creative

artists

can promote local culture.

Governments

can provide local

artist

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artists

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with an opportunity to promote their work, and tourists can have a chance to study the culture and history of cities.

For example

, the Suzhou

government

paid for local

artists

and

encourage

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them to draw on the street wall.

As a result

,

this

special method successfully

catch

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more attention of tourists.

Furthermore

, the financial

support

of

government

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for

artists

can protect the

extinctive

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extinction

art

skills. Some

artists

will historical

art

skills might give up their work because they cannot

sufficient

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money to

support

their lives.

Therefore

,

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government

support

can help them continue to create works of

art

.

On the other hand

, the success of

artists

can be driven by

the

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market demand rather than

the

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government

support

.

Artists

have to keep improving their abilities to attract more fans and buyers.

For example

, a digital

art

platform in China

enable

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artists

to receive direct

support

from fans, allowing them to improve their quality of

works

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work

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and sell more products.

In addition

, I think

governments

should spend money on more important areas,

such

as education and

infrastructures

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. In conclusion,

the

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government

spending should focus on other important areas

ranther

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rather

than

the

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creative

artists

, and I think the funding of

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can depend on the market demand.