Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local person when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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cultural and historical attractions that need to be preserved and

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one of the significant

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of incomes

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incomes

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to

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the local economy.

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foreign visitors should be charged more than local people which I will explain in the following paragraph.

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with, there is no doubt that it is important for the government and the public to keep national sites protected and clean because

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the right ways of doing it will

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longer for

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future generations to experience it.

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, maintenance fees are expensive

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expert cleaners and professional security guards to do their

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.

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the extra charges from the tourists can help ease the process.

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activity enhances the revenue allocation toward community development projects that give benefits to local residents.

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, some might

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regardless unfairness of the

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fees among tourists and

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local

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locals

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while

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visiting

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cultural and historical places

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can

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to potential negative impacts on tourism.

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action might

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the country's reputation on the

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stages

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equity

price

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foreigns

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foreign

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can boost and foster cultural exchange rather than

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in contrast

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. In conclusion, despite all the drawbacks

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considering the vital parts of keeping

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good care

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the structure of cultural and historical attractions.

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, making a profit to the local economy means

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lining between the unfairness. In my part of

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, I agree

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that

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foreign visitors should pay more compared to local visitors.