The pie charts show the reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

pia

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charts describe the purposes people in Great Britain had for visiting art

musuems

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museums

in the years 1990 and 2000.

Overall

, it is

vivid

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clear

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from the chart that, to learn and gain knowledge were the most

while

others were the least reasons over the given period. In

compraison

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comparison

to fill their travel schedules was 27% in 1990 later jumped down 12% in 2000. But to buy art unpopular

throught out

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throughout

the period of time. It is

also

noticed from the charts that, to attend a special exhibit was going up.

To spend

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time

friends

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and family was going up from 12% to 17% it was still lower than

to attend

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a special

exhibit

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exhibition

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in 2000.

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, to learn and gain knowledge were more than between 1990 and 2000 to fill schedule was in 2000 in

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the UK

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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3 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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