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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015.
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The chart illustrates the
number
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 of
households
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 in the US by their annual income in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015. The income
categories
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 are less than $25,000, $25,000-$49,999, $50,000-$74,999, $75,000-$99,999, and $100,000 or more. In 2007, the highest
number
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 of
households
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 fell into the $25,000-$49,999 income range, with around 30
million
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households
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. The $50,000-$74,999 category had approximately 25
million
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households
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, followed by the less than $25,000 and $75,000-$99,999
categories
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, each with around 20
million
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households
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. The least
number
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 of
households
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, about 15
million
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, earned $100,000 or more. In 2011, the distribution saw some changes. The
number
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 of
households
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 earning $25,000-$49,999 slightly decreased,
while
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 those earning $100,000 or more increased to roughly 20
million
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. The other
categories
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 remained relatively stable compared to 2007. By 2015, the most significant growth was observed in
households
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 earning $100,000 or more, which increased to around 30
million
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. The $25,000-$49,999 category continued to have a high
number
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 of
households
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, but the $50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999
categories
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 saw a slight decrease.
Households
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 earning less than $25,000 remained fairly consistent across the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, categories, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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