The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart here illustrates the average temperatures of New York

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to the revenue generated by the selling of bathing

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in the span of six

months

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, from January to June, in the year of 2012. The average

temparature

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temperature

was calculated in

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fahrenheit

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and the

sale

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of the bathing suite in hundred

thousands

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US

dollars

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. To summarise, the

temperature

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shows an upward trend,

while

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the bathing suit

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sale

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increased in

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four consecutive

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, followed by a sharp declining trend in the

last

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two

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. The

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of the January month was just above 30

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fahrenheit

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, at that time the money earned by selling the suits was at 1 million

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. In the following month, the

temperature

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dropped very slightly ,

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, the

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sale

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increased

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25 hundred thousand

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.

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March, the

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sales

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hit the 1.5 million mark, when the

temperature

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spiked to almost 40

degree

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fahrenheit

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.

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, the biggest

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sale

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was during April, at almost 3 million

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, when the

temperature

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was around 50

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. The

temperature

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kept rising in the following two

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. But the

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sale

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dropped below in May, below 1 mil