The graph below shows the average trip length (in miles) among U.S. children aged 5 to 15 years old. Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The graph below shows the average trip length (in miles) among U.S. children aged 5 to 15 years old.

Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
The provided line graph illustrates the
quantity
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of
miles
traveled
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by different kinds of transport per every kid in the USA, whose age is in the range from 5 to 15 years, in half a century from 1970 until 2020. There are six ways of tripping
such
as walking,cycling,
bus
, car, train and taxi. On the graph, using the
bus
is the most popular way of getting to the target place,
while
walking and
offering
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a taxi
is
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least common among these types. Over five decades, most modes showed an upward trend in distance
traveled
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travelled
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except for two: walking and cycling.
Firstly
, the 50 years saw a constant rise in
miles
per child using the
bus
, from under 29 to 39
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During the same period, car
usage
reached a peak at the beginning of the millennium, rising from 20 to 31
miles
, though it slightly fell to 29 in 2020.
By contrast
, cycling, which stood at the same
miles
as
bus
usage
in 1970, decreased at the same rate as
bus
usage
increased, leading to 19
miles
in 2020.
Similarly
, walking reflected car
usage
trends, collapsing to 11
miles
after an initial rise from 16 to 5
miles
at the start of the century, followed by a rise to 7
miles
in 2020. Train
usage
stood at 17
miles
in 1970,
then
fluctuated between 19 and 21
miles
,
finally
remaining at 31
miles
at the end
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Taxi
usage
increased from 5 to 15
miles
in 1990 and, in the next two decades, mirrored the previous two decades by returning to 5
miles
,
then
sharply rising to 20
miles
per child.
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