The graph below shows the average trip length (in miles) among U.S. children aged 5 to 15 years old. Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
The provided line graph illustrates the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
miles
traveled
by different kinds of transport per every kid in the USA, whose age is in the range from 5 to 15 years, in half a century from 1970 until 2020. There are six ways of tripping Change the spelling
travelled
such
as walking,cycling, bus
, car, train and taxi.
On the graph, using the bus
is the most popular way of getting to the target place, while
walking and offering
a taxi Verb problem
taking
is
least common among these types. Over five decades, most modes showed an upward trend in distance Correct subject-verb agreement
are
traveled
except for two: walking and cycling.
Change the spelling
travelled
Firstly
, the 50 years saw a constant rise in miles
per child using the bus
, from under 29 to 39..
During the same period, car Replace the punctuation
.
...
usage
reached a peak at the beginning of the millennium, rising from 20 to 31 miles
, though it slightly fell to 29 in 2020. By contrast
, cycling, which stood at the same miles
as bus
usage
in 1970, decreased at the same rate as bus
usage
increased, leading to 19 miles
in 2020. Similarly
, walking reflected car usage
trends, collapsing to 11 miles
after an initial rise from 16 to 5 miles
at the start of the century, followed by a rise to 7 miles
in 2020.
Train usage
stood at 17 miles
in 1970, then
fluctuated between 19 and 21 miles
, finally
remaining at 31 miles
at the end
..
Taxi Replace the punctuation
.
...
usage
increased from 5 to 15 miles
in 1990 and, in the next two decades, mirrored the previous two decades by returning to 5 miles
, then
sharply rising to 20 miles
per child.Submitted by zerdeteacher2024 on
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