The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Write at least 150 words. You may spend 20 minutes to complete the task
The chart illustrates a comparison between
France
and the UK
in the consumption of some products during 2010. Overall
, France
seems to demand more than the UK
for cars, books and cameras, but for computers and perfumes the UK
took the lead.
On the one hand, both the UK
and France
depend on cars as both of them showed high results, but still, France
is higher by nearly 50K. Furthermore
, France
presents big differences when it comes to books and cameras with a gap of about 100k and 200k , respectively, making France
in the lead most of the time.
On the other hand
, the UK
changed the equation in both computers and perfumes, but still, these differences are negligible which are 25k and 50k , respectively, when we compare it with the differences in other products.
To sum up
, despite the UK
's consumption i computers and perfumes, it has been noticed that France
consumes more than the UK
in most of its products.Submitted by okalqusay on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk, k with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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