The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the mean of
remunarations
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remunerations
remuneration
in seven different cities from England and Scotland of The United Kingdom,
categorizing
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according to
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population
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. The money is calculated in
pounds
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. The city of London has the highest number of residents, at 50951 and their average
salary
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is 33,634
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, which
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it
in
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the top in average income. Cambridge is in the second position in that category as
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its
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avarage remunaration
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average remuneration
is just above 29
thousands
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pounds
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,
while
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its
population
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is the lowest being just below 2200. Bristol ranks third in the
salary
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bracket with around 27
thousands
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pounds
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salary
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with
the
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population
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of 3111.
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, Edinburgh is just below Bristol with only
few
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hundreds
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pounds
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less.
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, the lowest earning city is the Birmingham and ma with only around 25
thousands
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of
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pounds
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. To summarise, the
higest
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highest
median
salary
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is in London, which is
also
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the most populated city.
On the other hand
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, the average
salary
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of the people of Birmingham is the lowest and in
term
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of
population
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, Cambridge takes that place.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, pounds, salary with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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