The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the mean of

remunarations

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remunerations

remuneration

in seven different cities from England and Scotland of The United Kingdom,

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according to

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population

. The money is calculated in

pounds

. The city of London has the highest number of residents, at 50951 and their average

salary

is 33,634

pounds

, which

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the top in average income. Cambridge is in the second position in that category as

it's

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avarage remunaration

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average remuneration

is just above 29

thousands

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pounds

while

its

population

is the lowest being just below 2200. Bristol ranks third in the

salary

bracket with around 27

thousands

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pounds

salary

with

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population

of 3111.

Similarly

, Edinburgh is just below Bristol with only

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hundreds

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pounds

less.

However

, the lowest earning city is the Birmingham and ma with only around 25

thousands

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pounds

. To summarise, the

higest

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highest

median

salary

is in London, which is

also

the most populated city.

On the other hand

, the average

salary

of the people of Birmingham is the lowest and in

term

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population

, Cambridge takes that place.

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