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The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information about the types of household
accommodation
 in England and Wales during the years 1918 and 2010. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that in 1971 the percentages of the two types were equal.
In addition
, the households in rented
accommodation
 were increasing gradually during the interval of 1918-2011,
whereas
 the households in owned
accommodation
 were decreasing.
According to
 what is shown, in 1918 the ratio of
people
 in rented
accommodation
 was at its peak and represented approximately 76%.
Moreover
, no changes happened between the years 1934 and 1953 and the pre-cents remained the same with almost 68% of
people
 in rented
houses
 and 32% in owned
houses
. In 1961 there was a significant sore in the number of
people
 who owned shelters and it increased about 10%. In terms of the interval 1981-2011, the percentages of
people
 in owned
houses
 fluctuated between 60% and 70%.
In contrast
, the proportion of households in rented
houses
 plunged and reached the smallest proportion with approximately 31%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation, people, houses with synonyms.
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