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The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
 report derives from the listed pie charts which enumerate the comparison in the share of jobless, occupied and
further
education
 of Australian secondary school graduates in the period of time within 3 decades, more precisely, in 1980, 1990 and 2000. The unit of measurement in
percent
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. A glance at the charts reveals that
the
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1980 witnessed the most colossal proportion of
further
education
 takers and 1990 was the year that experienced a decent amount of job seekers
whereas
 a tremendous quantity of
people
who have
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had
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 a job in 2000.
In addition
, the percentage of unemployed
people
 was the lowest in each chart.
To begin
 with, mankind who decided to proceed
their
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with their
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education
resulted
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 50% in 1980, compared to the
people
 with
job
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jobs
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 comprised 40%, and the rest of the tiny 10%
took
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was taken
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 by jobless
people
. As regards
the
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1990, unemployed individuals faced an inferior share of merely 12%, whilst employed and
further
education
 takers recorded 50% which is
the a
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substantion
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substantial
substantive
 indicator and 38%, respectively. In stark contrast to the aforementioned years,
similarly
,
people
 who preferred to carry on their
education
 constituted 37%,
while
 55% comprised
people
 with occupation as the most remarkable metric throughout the entire listed years,
along with
 the measly percentage of jobless humankind,
resulted
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resulted in
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 8% in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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