You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. – statement/situation. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to ask a few questions about your

sports

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club

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as well as

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tell you about my willingness to participate in it. I am Tom Smith

who is

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a freshman at Community College and I have been studying at

this

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college for three months. To tell the truth, I am very keen on doing the exercise, so I searched for

sports

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clubs around us.

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, I have recently discovered that your

sports

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club

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, Strongest, is by far the best one.

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the fact that the college which I am studying at now has no

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club

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, I need another one to attend since doing exercises regularly is an integral part of my life, so I am going to take part in your

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. Regarding my question

first,

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Could you tell me the price of the subscription to the

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that, you advertised that a person who would join the

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in the first three days of March could get a discount of 50

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. Is it available? And

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are

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there a wide range of

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tools which members of the

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can use there? I hope you will answer all my questions fully and I would be grateful if you reply in the near future. Yours faithfully, Tom Smith.

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coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, which enhances readability.

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You have used a polite and formal tone suitable for a letter to a club manager.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

228 words

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