You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. – statement/situation. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to ask a few questions about your

sports

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club

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as well as

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tell you about my willingness to participate in it. I am Tom Smith

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a freshman at Community College and I have been studying at

this

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college for three months. To tell the truth, I am very keen on doing the exercise, so I searched for

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clubs around us.

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, I have recently discovered that your

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club

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, Strongest, is by far the best one.

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the fact that the college which I am studying at now has no

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club

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, I need another one to attend since doing exercises regularly is an integral part of my life, so I am going to take part in your

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. Regarding my question

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Could you tell me the price of the subscription to the

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that, you advertised that a person who would join the

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in the first three days of March could get a discount of 50

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. Is it available? And

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are

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there a wide range of

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tools which members of the

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can use there? I hope you will answer all my questions fully and I would be grateful if you reply in the near future. Yours faithfully, Tom Smith.

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To improve logical structure and coherence, consider linking sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. Using transition words can help in guiding the reader through your points.

task achievement

Your task response was fairly complete, but reviewing the prompt carefully to ensure you address all required points in detail could enhance your score.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, which enhances readability.

task achievement

You have used a polite and formal tone suitable for a letter to a club manager.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

228 words

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