The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The number of
shops closure
and openings Fix the agreement mistake
shop closures
of
one country is represented with Change preposition
in
line
graph, in an Add an article
a line
eight-years
period from 2011 to 2018.
Correct your spelling
eight-year
Overall
, it is noticeable that a reasonable number of shops
that closed annually was
outnumbered Unnecessary verb
apply
that
Correct pronoun usage
those that
of remain
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remained
opened
throughout the given time frame. Replace the word
open
However
, it is interesting to note that both line graphs underwent a downward trend at the end
of a compared year.
Starting in 2011, at around 8,500 shops
, was the higest
figure of an ongoing business among other years. Followed by that Correct your spelling
highest
of
in 2012, it plummeted Change preposition
apply
down
to 4,000 Change preposition
apply
shops
before rose
up to 6,000 Wrong verb form
rising
shops
in 2014. On the other hand
, that
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apply
of
those closing their business experienced a Change preposition
apply
fluctuate
trend before Change the verb form
fluctuating
maintain
its figure at the same rate of 6,500 Change the verb form
maintaining
shops
.
From 2014 onwards, in 2015, the statistics of closing shops
dropped twofolded of
those still opening at 8,000 Change preposition
apply
shops
, and 4,000 shops
, respectively. While
the closure
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number of closures
continue
the rise in 2016 and Wrong verb form
continued
remain
stable rate in Wrong verb form
remained
that
end of 2018, that of those opening one remained constant before falling Correct determiner usage
the
at
3,000 Change preposition
to
shops
in 2018.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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