The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the database of the top three producers in the world in four dairy
products
in 2012.
In summary, milk
was the highest product
of the four different dairy products
, which are milk
, cheese, butter, and milk
powder. Besides
, the EU was the only producer that joined the top three in all aspects.
In the year survey, the number of products
of milk
reached the highest point which was total 359 thousand. In this
product
, the top three included the EU, India, and the USA. The European Union contributed the most , with around 142,970. Following that was cheese product
, EU still got the highest date, second as the United States of America and next was Brazil instead
of India.
In this
year, the amount of butter and milk
powder was lower than others. The number of butter products
contributed around 10 thousand which was much fewer than milk
and cheese. And the remaining product
just only got 3 thousand.Submitted by lyhuongclc on
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