The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the database of the top three producers in the world in four dairy
products
in 2012. In summary,
milk
was the highest
product
of the four different dairy
products
, which are
milk
, cheese, butter, and
milk
powder.
Besides
, the EU was the only producer that joined the top three in all aspects. In the year survey, the number of
products
of
milk
reached the highest point which was total 359 thousand. In
this
product
, the top three included the EU, India, and the USA. The European Union contributed the most , with around 142,970. Following that was cheese
product
, EU still got the highest date, second as the United States of America and next was Brazil
instead
of India. In
this
year, the amount of butter and
milk
powder was lower than others. The number of butter
products
contributed around 10 thousand which was much fewer than
milk
and cheese. And the remaining
product
just only got 3 thousand.
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