The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the amount of fresh
fish
from local and brought from abroad into Perth,Australia between the
years
2004 and 2014, measured in metric
tons
Overall
, the
number
of
fish
both local and imported had increased since the
year
2004,
however
, it had fluctuated in amounts over the
years
. The
number
of local
fish
caught has increased staidly from the
year
2004 reaching its highest point a the
year
2008 by almost 4 times as 2004. After that, it had a gradual drop in the following
years
stopping at 5031 metric
tons
in 2014. The imported
fish
numbers have had a relatively steady increase over the
years
it had a beak in
number
in the
year
2012 reaching about 1227.3 metric
tons
. After that, it decreased tremendously in the
years
2013 and 2014 stopping at 782.7 metric
tons
.
while
the total
number
of Both local and imported
fish
was the highest in 2009.
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