The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the amount of fresh
fish
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from local and brought from abroad into Perth,Australia between the
years
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2004 and 2014, measured in metric
tons
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Overall
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, the
number
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of
fish
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both local and imported had increased since the
year
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2004,
however
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, it had fluctuated in amounts over the
years
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. The
number
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of local
fish
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caught has increased staidly from the
year
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2004 reaching its highest point a the
year
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2008 by almost 4 times as 2004. After that, it had a gradual drop in the following
years
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stopping at 5031 metric
tons
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in 2014. The imported
fish
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numbers have had a relatively steady increase over the
years
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it had a beak in
number
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in the
year
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2012 reaching about 1227.3 metric
tons
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. After that, it decreased tremendously in the
years
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2013 and 2014 stopping at 782.7 metric
tons
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.
while
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the total
number
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of Both local and imported
fish
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was the highest in 2009.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, years, tons, number, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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