The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The graph shows the comparisons of the old and new

shops

from each year. It’s stated that the number of

shops

each year has been either terminated or still running, 2011 is the year that 9,000

shops

have been reportedly closed every day, and

store

owners

didn’t have the debt to keep their places running so the best way to deal with

this

situation is to close the shop. In 2012, has

also

had the same problem as Its

shops

were declining a lot and no new

shops

were beginning to open, It’s not a good start for

store

owners

to see their

stores

declining. Jump forward to 2018 new

stores

have recently opened and it’s getting better and better,

while

recent

shops

have dropped significantly in recent days. From 2015 a lot of

stores

were in critical condition and 1000

shops

were closed because of the recent debts

store

owners

were struggling to pay.

Furthermore

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in 2016, many

shops

were dropped again, and now rarely other

shops

now are open because of the time there. In conclusion, from 2011 to 2018 shop

owners

struggled to keep their

stores

running

while

some are likely able to do,

hence

I think

this

is a lot of issue for opening a shop because they have to make more money and bring ideas to attract more customers into their

shops

and bring business.

However

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it is unlikely that new

shops

are struggling to keep their finances, but

store

owners

need to pay their debts to ensure their

shops

can keep going on well.