Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some say that

music

is a good method of uniting individuals of diverse

cultures

and

generations

.

This

essay agrees with

this

opinion because ,

firstly

music

is a universal language and relished is enjoyed by everyone.

Moreover

, People are free to speak up, through

music

, some artists can deliver social messages that can reach people regardless of their

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judgment

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ages

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and

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cultures

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culture

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.

Music

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ability to convey emotions and feelings that are universally understood. Musicians express their thoughts

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arrangements and melodies. They have their own preferences in the genre of

music

, these can describe the feeling of an arranger. The melody of

music

can be enjoyed by everybody in various

generations

or

cultures

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as traditional songs may be played by foreigners, and genres of

music

have listeners from several

generations

.

In particular

, children may enjoy classical and elders love rock or the drawback.

Furthermore

,

music

is a powerful storytelling method. The song’s writer Songwriters often use lyrics to address social

issues

and critique communities.

Music

may have told the audience

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the lyrics to describe social

issues

and criticism

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the community. The message is sent by

music

because it can be listened to across

cultures

and ages.

Therefore

, the musicians expected

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changes

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public opinion on social

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the

music

they created. In

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, the song came from another country with

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language,

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melody breaks the barriers and influences individuals in diverse nations.

For example

, the song’s writer, Michael Jackson

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his song “Heal the World” gives a message

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his fans to save the children in Africa. In conclusion, I agree that

music

is

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way to bridge people

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different ages and

cultures

.

Music

is part of the arts which is universal, it breaks the borders of

generations

and

cultures

to enjoy it. The lyrics and arrangement enable spread around the world,

therefore

, musicians campaign social

issues

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music

to influence others and bring them

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unity.