The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of 

new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates the tallies of the
shops
in a nation that were put up and permanently closed, during an 8 years span starting from 2011.
Overall
, we observe that, apart from 2011 and 2015 the number of openings was much lower the than closers of the
shops
.
Apart from
this
, 2011 and 2013, witnessed the highest closure and opening of a shop respectively. On closer examination, it can be seen that, in 2011, more than 8000
shops
were established.
Moreover
, in 2015
this
figure was close to 4000. Since 2012, until the next two years, there has been a steady rise in the number of
shops
opened, resulting in 6000 openings,
this
was in 2014.
However
, in 2015 the numbers were almost
same
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cases,
that is
roughly 6000.
Conversely
, in the preceding year, the country recorded at least 3000 more establishments than closures,
this
was the maximum difference that the country experienced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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