You live in a house opposite a park. Every day a man brings large dogs to the park and lets them run free. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the danger. In your letter say where the park is, say how often this happens give a description of the man a

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the national park located near the centre of the city.The problem
about
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the off-lease
dog
.It is commonly seen that a
man
comes with the
dog
every evening.
Although
the
dog
do
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not
looks
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fierce , it may be scary for small children to play
while
dogs
walking
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around them.I hope you will take strict action against
this
situation.Here, I am going to give a brief description of
man
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and his
dog
.
This
man
is 6 feet tall with a white skin complexion and comes with
23-inch
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larger boxer
dog
at 4pm every day. Despite having restrictions on off-lease dogs in the park ,
this
man
feel
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free with his dogs. He not only allowed his
dog
to run free
,
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, but
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also
performed some stunts
sometime
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.
This
negligence can cause serious injuries
for
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visitors.I hope you will confront
this
issue soon. I am looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, Parm
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coherence cohesion
Try to clearly separate different points into separate paragraphs for easier reading and better logical structure.
task achievement
Ensure that all sentences are complete and grammatically correct.
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Expand on your points more to provide a comprehensive response, especially when describing the frequency and the danger posed by the dogs.
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Good use of a formal tone appropriate for a letter to the local council.
coherence cohesion
Clear closing and greeting that fits the context of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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