The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps present a factorial
area
now in the town of Norton
,
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and predicted plan for the advancement of the location in the future.
Overall
, the whole
area
now is covered by factories beside farmland, and it is planned to be a full compound facility like a school, shops medical
center
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..etc
To begin
with, I will describe the
area
now, in the north
side
it is overlayed by a river and farmland, and in the south there is a road, in the middle of the map there is a roundabout and on each
side
of the road, there is multiple factories.
Moreover
, the planned future advancement, there is going to be a school on the east
side
nearby there will be a playground on the north of the road with housing on the
side
, near the roundabout there will be a smaller one and a medical
center
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in the south shops will be in the other
side
more of the western
side
and more housing if you went more north, the river will be split to make a bridge which connects the
area
and more housing will be near the farm which will take part in the northeast
side
only
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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