Some children spend hours every day оп their smartphones. Why is this the case? Оо уои think this is а positive or а negative development?

Cell phones are taking more and more life from

kids

daily ,it is

due to

busy parents in the recent fast era of living ,I think It should be seen as

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for the child as it is giving the child

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more of

a receiver than active behaviour.

To begin

with, we are witnessing the changing of lifestyle and how it has become a really rushed way of living that we do not even have time to be with our

kids

,most of the parents are at work leaving

kids

home alone or with a babysitter, leading

kids

to waste their time on the phone ,neglecting

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is seen in most of the houses ,to explain more; exposure to smartphones makes

kids

more addictive because

that is

how nowadays networks is designed which will lead to more hours spent on the phone .

Moreover

, I think it is a dangerous thing to leave

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kid to be exposed all

this

amount of time on the phone as it will affect their personality that it is not even theirs anymore ,

for example

, if a kid is experiencing life on his own without any outer source he will have his dependent acts ,

while

if a kid is getting all information about life from a cellphone his character will be built from social media influencers and will not have his own.

To sum up

, I think children's exposure to phones should be minimized as much as possible by parents paying more attention to their

kids

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so that

kids

will not be independent and rely on their phones.