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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the current
area
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 of
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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 industrial
area
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 compared to the planned future development layout.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 in the future, it will become a housing
area
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instead
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 of
factory
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a factory
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area
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,
along with
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 the facilities for the residents.
According to
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be build
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, replacing the factory on the east
side
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 of the
area
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 and the southwestern
side
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 of the roundabout, respectively, and the remaining factory buildings will be replaced by houses. Meanwhile, a medical centre will be
contructed
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constructed
 at the southeastern
side
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 of the roundabout.
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, a playground will be added between the houses and the river, at the right wing of the
area
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. Two housing areas,
moreover
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, will be added on the
north-west
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northwest
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side
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 of Norbiton. On the north
side
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, there will be a bridge connecting the roundabout to a new housing
area
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 across the river, which used to be
a
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farmland. There will
also
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 be a new housing
area
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 on the left
side
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 of the bridge. The farmland,
however
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, will be moved to the northeastern
side
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 of the
area
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.
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, the location of the town and the roundabout will remain unchanged.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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