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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain.
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The pie chart shows how the
money
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 was spent in 2017, 2018 and the table gives information about the Police
Budget
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 from four different sources:(National Government, Local Taxes, Other sources )
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 the highest amount of
money
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 was spent on Salaries, and the least
money
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 was spent on technology, in both 2017 and 2018, In term of The Police
Budget
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 in total in 2018 was the highest
budget
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 with 318.6, compared with 2017
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304.7. In terms of how the
money
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 was spent, in 2017 was the highest with 75% and in 2018 with 69%, both in Salaries, for both technology and Buildings and transport, 2017 with (8%, 17%) and in 2018 with (14%, 17%).
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 comparing 2017 and 2018 in the Police
Budget
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 2018 was the highest
budget
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 in total, For the National government, Local Taxes, and other sources. In 2017 with (175,5, 91,2, 38) In 2018 (177,8, 102,3, 38,5).

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, budget with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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