Nowadays food travels thousands of miles before reaching consumers. It affects the agriculture and economy of the destination country, and for this reason, people should prefer food produced by local farmers. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your experience.

totally gree We live in an age when many

of

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foods

go through

diffrenet

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different

process stages

befor

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before

arive

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arrive

to the consumers, and

this

affects both the economy of the

country

and regional agriculture,

as a result

of that, people should

start

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support

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the

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local

foods

.

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,

this

essay totally agrees with

this

statment

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statement

because the product of the

country

more

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healthy and

frisher

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fresher

beside

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, supporting the economic culture of the region.

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,

foods

are

importing

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from out of the

country

has

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have

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been

prcessed

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processed

pressed

by preservatives to reach the

the

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distnation

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destination

distinction

with

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good condition, during the transportation process it becomes unhealthy and

loss

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the

importan

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important

nutration

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nutrition

nutritional

components.

for

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that

reasons

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reason

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people should be aware of what they are eating and use the local farmer to provide them with

frish

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fresh

fish

and organic

food

and support them to increase the production of their clean products.

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,

import

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cane

vegetabels

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vegetables

vegetable

could

be preserve

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for

long

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time more than frish

one

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after being mixed with toxic chemicals and stored in bad

condition

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bad-condition

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environment,

could

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which could

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lead to

hormones disorder

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hormone disorders

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.

In addition

to the above points, supporting the regional

agreculture

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agriculture

to increase their products can have a positive impact

in

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on

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the economy and lead to

create

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creating

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more investment

opportunties

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opportunities

in the region.

Moreover

,

this

should

encurage

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encourage

people to replace the prcessed

foods

by high quality homemade

foods

and sell them in the local market, for

insatnce

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instance

, Panda is

supermarket

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a supermarket

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in Saudi Arabia have

section

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a section

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for

the

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local products and have a

variat

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variant

variety

choices of

food

like

,

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frish vegetables, homemade bread, organic

food

. Which

increase

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increases

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the demand for the

proudcts

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products

product

. In conclusion, nations should be

concernen

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concerned

about their health and stop

eat

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eating

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processed

food

and help their

economical

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economic

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country

field to grow.