The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The two maps compare the changes in Lynwich

College

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from 2006 to the present day.

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, a new canteen was constructed which connects to the various buildings

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more space created for transport. The path that used to connect the

college

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building to the

library

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is now replaced by a canteen located at the centre of the

college

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. A noticeable feature of the new cafeteria is how well it is connected to various buildings. Trees which were located near building 2 in 2006 were cut down to make way for the

library

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which used to be located near the car park. The sports centre has replaced the

library

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. Interestingly, both colleges remain in the same location

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but are now connected to the

library

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as well as

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the canteen. Transport appears to be improved because there are various ways to reach the

college

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now. The car park has halved in size to make room for bike storage.

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, there is a new bus stop built close to the car park which allows students to reach the school by bus.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, library with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

181 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
wider range of facilities and amenities

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