The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The two maps compare the changes in Lynwich
College
from 2006 to the present day.
Overall
, a new canteen was constructed which connects to the various buildings
as well as
more space created for transport. The path that used to connect the
college
building to the
library
is now replaced by a canteen located at the centre of the
college
. A noticeable feature of the new cafeteria is how well it is connected to various buildings. Trees which were located near building 2 in 2006 were cut down to make way for the
library
which used to be located near the car park. The sports centre has replaced the
library
. Interestingly, both colleges remain in the same location
,
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but are now connected to the
library
as well as
the canteen. Transport appears to be improved because there are various ways to reach the
college
now. The car park has halved in size to make room for bike storage.
In addition
, there is a new bus stop built close to the car park which allows students to reach the school by bus.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words college, library with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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