The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Canadians spending
money
on charitable organizations from 2000 to 2015. People aged 18 to 24 who gave charity in 2000 were at 20%
while
in 2015 the
number
was approximately above 10%, making 18 to 24 in 2000 the donation had its highest
number
of donors. In 2000, people aged 25 to 34 who donated their
money
to charity, was only 25%.
Although
in 2015 the
number
had risen, even though it is still the lowest just standing at 25%. From the age of 35 to 49, the
number
of
money
given to the organization in 2000 rose drastically in giving donations to just below 40%. In the following year in 2015, the
number
incline to above 30%.
However
, its numbers still have not surpassed the year 2000. From the age of 50 to 64 years, the
number
of people in 2000 had declined gradually to below 35%, but in the year 2015, the
number
had greatly increased doubling to 38%.
Lastly
, at 65 years and over in 2000 the amount of
money
spent decreased to 32%,
on the other hand
, the
number
doubled to 34% in 2015. In conclusion, the amount of
money
spent in 2000 and 2015 has risen equally over a couple of years with others showing who is dominant over another.
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