The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph below
compare
the amount of Change the verb form
compares
degree
who travels
by Correct subject-verb agreement
travel
car
, bus
or train in United
Kingdom from 1970 to 2030.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, during this
sixty-year period, travel by car
remained the biggest index during 60 years. In the 1970
who Correct your spelling
1970s
drive
a Wrong verb form
drove
bus
was in the middle of the diagram with ear to the 4 degree
, Change to a plural noun
degrees
as well as
with every ten years become
slowly decreasing from 4 to 3 points.
As can be seen from the graph, Verb problem
apply
small
amount of people who Add an article
a small
are travels
by train showed the lowest indicator with 2 Wrong verb form
travel
degree
, and Change to a plural noun
degrees
till to
Change preposition
by
the
2030 started increasing to 5 Change the article
apply
degree
. Change to a plural noun
degrees
However
, by 2015 the number of people travel
by Wrong verb form
travelling
bus
become
less. The gap in travelling by Wrong verb form
became
this
three transport Correct determiner usage
these
had
widened and considerably more money was spent Unnecessary verb
apply
for
the Change preposition
on
car
and train
than travelling by Correct subject-verb agreement
trains
bus
.
The period between 1970 and 2030 saw a
sharp growth and in Correct article usage
apply
the
2030 people will spend more money to drive a Correct article usage
apply
car
with 9 degree
as much as they did in 1970.Change to a plural noun
degrees
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