The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts above illustrate the expenditure habits of
people
in the UK between 1971 and 2001. There are various habits, such
as for foods
, cars, books, computers, Fix the agreement mistake
food
furnitures
, restaurants, Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
petrol
. Correct word choice
and petrol
Overall
, the citizen having
shifted how they Wrong verb form
have
spending
their Wrong verb form
spend
money
in two different years.
In 2001, the UK's people
most expend their budget on cars with nearly 45 per cent
. Meanwhile, in 1971, the
Correct article usage
apply
people
more
considerate Add a missing verb
were more
to
spending Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
money
on foods
. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Besides
that, in 2001, the spending of
Change preposition
on
foods
and restaurants Fix the agreement mistake
food
is
Wrong verb form
was
in
the same per Change preposition
at
cent
, which is 14 per cent
. However
, in 1971, people
tend
to use the Wrong verb form
tended
money
on cars with total
Correct article usage
a total
22
per Change preposition
of 22
cent
. Besides
, in 2001, 12 per cent
from
their Change preposition
of
money
was used for computers.
On the one hand, in 2001, the percentage which below
10 per Add a missing verb
was below
cent
was for furnitures
, books, and petrol. Respectively, 8 per Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
cent
, 1 per cent
, and 8 per cent
. On the other hand
, in 1971, the expenditures which same as or under 10 per cent
are
petrol, restaurants, Wrong verb form
were
furnitures
, computers, and books.Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
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