The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts illustrate the habits of society spent in United the Kindom in 1971 and 2001.
Overall
, it can be seen that in 2001
was
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the highest the cars
while
the lowest
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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books.
in addition
, in 1971 the biggest
items
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item
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which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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was food. Meanwhile, the lowest was computers Looking at
pie
Correct article usage
the pie
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charts detail in 2011, cars
was
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were
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the largest at 45 per
cent
, followed by restaurants at 14 per
cent
then
computers were at 12 per
cent
. And
then
, petrol and furniture were the same amount at 8 per
cent
. the lowest was books at 1 per
cent
. Regarding the data shown in 1971, food began at 44 per
cent
, followed by cars at 22 per
cent
then
petrol was at 10 per
cent
. The
next,
furniture was 9 per
cent
, it was followed by restaurants at 7 per
cent
. And
then
books and computers were the lowest at just under 7 per
cent
.
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