The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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The pie charts illustrate the habits of society spent in United the Kindom in 1971 and 2001.

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, it can be seen that in 2001

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the highest the cars

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the lowest

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books.

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, in 1971 the biggest

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was food. Meanwhile, the lowest was computers Looking at

pie

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the pie

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charts detail in 2011, cars

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the largest at 45 per

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, followed by restaurants at 14 per

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computers were at 12 per

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, petrol and furniture were the same amount at 8 per

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. the lowest was books at 1 per

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. Regarding the data shown in 1971, food began at 44 per

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, followed by cars at 22 per

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petrol was at 10 per

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. The

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furniture was 9 per

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, it was followed by restaurants at 7 per

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books and computers were the lowest at just under 7 per

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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