The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The provided pie charts illustrate the percentage of sales in the online shop for retail parts in
Canada
over a five year
period.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest proportion of Add a hyphen
five-year
selling
was for Electronic and Appliance.Replace the word
sales
However
,people did not prefer to buy Home Furnishings in Canada
over the period.
In 2005,nearly a third of people (%35) tended to purchase Electronic and Applience
in Correct your spelling
Appliance
Canada
(which was the highest amount of sales over the period),compared to 2010 which
the proportion of marketing was %30.Correct word choice
when
Moreover
,precisely a quarter of customers chose to buy Home Furnishings (%25),just ahead of selling Home Furnishings at 15 per cent in Canada
in 2010.(Which was the lowest percentage of trading over the whole year).
Selling Food and Bevera
ge in 2005 was not as successful as marketing Fix the agreement mistake
Beverages
this
retail in Canada
in 2010 at %22 and %32,respectively.In addition
,the proportion of selling video games was %18 in Canada
in 2005.Whilst,just under a quarter of retail sa
le was for video games in Fix the agreement mistake
sales
Canada
in 2010.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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