More and more people today wear fashionable clothes is it positive or negative development ? Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?
It is true that many customers are attracted towards trendy their actual choice so they can use it longer time so they do not create waste
clothes
in market
and they are very selective towards fashion industries Add an article
the market
This
thing has more negative outcomes than the
positive ,Correct article usage
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this
essay shall discuss more supporting reasons in forth-coming paragraphs.
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To begin
with some merits of wearing trendy clothes
. First and foremost it shows equality among people
because Globalisation has huge
impact on everyone and similarities can be seen everywhere . Add an article
a huge
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example
nowadays jeans Add a comma
example,
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are
very
common choice of Add an article
a very
the very
clothes
it can be seen in any corner of the world thus
, one can easily find Correct pronoun usage
them it
it
any clothing store at the lowest price and Correct your spelling
in
it
can Correct pronoun usage
they
be afford
by Change the verb form
be afforded
middle
and poor class as well. Correct article usage
the middle
This
trendy cloth can be considered as
positive Correct your spelling
a
developments
. Apart from that, when Fix the agreement mistake
development
people
wear what they like its
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it
help
them to boost their confidence and same time he/she can Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
shows
their personality .
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show
On the other
hand
it has many Add a comma
hand,
draw backs
we can not neglect it. Following new fashion Correct your spelling
drawbacks
trend
has huge environmental impacts, as it Fix the agreement mistake
trends
create
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creates
greater
amount of waste when Add an article
a greater
people
try to follow latest
trend they throw out their old Correct article usage
the latest
clothes
or else they choose not to wear as
they are too old so they would dislike Correct pronoun usage
them as
to wear
old garments Change the verb form
wearing
hence
these old items become useless fo
them so it create Correct your spelling
for
same
waste problem like plastic.
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a same
Furthermore
, people
spend huge amount
of money Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
behind
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on
such
fashionable things .It upset budget
of Correct article usage
the budget
middle class
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middle-class
family
like Fix the agreement mistake
families
Zara
clothing brand Correct article usage
the Zara
it
too costly Correct your spelling
is
not
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and not
afford
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affordable
by
everyone when they launch new items everyone wants to buy Change preposition
for
it
but it can not possible for them. It might be possible it will create Correct pronoun usage
them
gap
between rich and poor. In Add an article
a gap
adding
to another impact on climateReplace the word
addition
as
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is
amount
of resources Add an article
the amount
use
by manufacturing industries is too high Wrong verb form
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it
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also
they are using chemical
to Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
dyeing
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dye
clothes
which are very toxic for
soil and water if they Change preposition
to
dump
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are dumped
in
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into
river
, Fix the agreement mistake
rivers
hence
it is harming our natural resources on
earth.
In conclusion , after discussing both sides Change preposition
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it is clear that
wearing trendy thing
is good but one must Fix the agreement mistake
things
should
pay attention Remove a modal verb
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while
doing
shopping. Unnecessary verb
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People
should more
awareAdd a missing verb
be more
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of
to
the environment.Change preposition
for
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