MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

MamadjonovSamandar:

The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
The line graph depicts the
number
of
students
from four Asian countries—Indonesia, Hong Kong, Singapore, and
Malaysia
enrolled in Australian universities from 1982 to 2000.
Overall
, Indonesia, Hong Kong, and Singapore
initially
had a similar
number
of
students
, but their figures diverged significantly over time. Meanwhile,
Malaysia
experienced a gradual decline despite having the highest
number
of
students
in the initial years. Indonesia started with fewer than 1,000
students
in 1982.
However
, there was a dramatic rise beginning in 1994, reaching 10,000
students
.
This
upward trend continued until 1998, peaking at nearly 20,000
students
by 2000.
In contrast
, Hong Kong remained steady with fewer than 1,000
students
from 1982 to 1997.
This
number
fluctuated significantly in the following years, eventually reaching 20,000
students
by 2000.
On the other hand
, both Malaysian and Singaporean
students
numbered 19,000 in 2000, despite
Malaysia
starting as the top country for student enrollment in Australia.
Malaysia
saw a gradual decline over the years,
whereas
Singapore experienced fluctuations but ultimately reached the same
number
as
Malaysia
by the end of the period.
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