The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates the percentages of unemployed males and females involved in different activities in the United Kingdom in the past year.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of the males were involved in activities in the
morining
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morning
more than females
whereas
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, in the afternoon both sexes participated or not. It is noticeable that men spent most of their time being active in the morning compared to women, with high percentages seen in job hunting, gardening, watching TV, reading, decorating, and walking.
This
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value could be compared to more ladies working in the morning with housework, and shopping. Figures were double for drinking and fourfold higher for playing sports. As for sitting around and staying in bed percentages remained the same for both sexes in the morning.
On the other hand
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, both genders spent their afternoon involved in most activities, with relative differences between them.
However
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, only men stayed in bed and played sports in the afternoon.
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