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lest
decade, Correct your spelling
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are
for
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apply
a
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rights
animals
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government
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the government
banned
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ban
the
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apply
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In my
opinion, I agree that Change preposition
My
zoos
should be Use synonyms
close
as it will greatly benefit both Replace the word
closed
animals
and society.
A good reason to abolish Use synonyms
zoos
is that the Use synonyms
animals
in the jungle Use synonyms
more
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are
safety
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, when Change the wording
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other words
people
let the Use synonyms
animals
live in the jungle, the Use synonyms
animals
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the
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danger
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moreover
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no
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environment
, they will Use synonyms
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breed
animals
will be Use synonyms
safety
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safe
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animals
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zoos
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and depressed than Correct word choice
weaker
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apply
animals
. Use synonyms
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, the jungle is the original place for Linking Words
animals
where they can be active.
Another point to consider is that imprisonment Use synonyms
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animals
in Change preposition
of animals
the
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apply
zoos
means that Use synonyms
human
will face huge Fix the agreement mistake
humans
problem
in the Fix the agreement mistake
problems
live
cycle balance. As Replace the word
life
will
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apply
as
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apply
animals
in Use synonyms
cage
the Fix the agreement mistake
cages
environment
will Use synonyms
surfing
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surf
be surfing
accordingly
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this
will affect Linking Words
individual’s
life. To illustrate, the percentage of breeding Correct article usage
an individual’s
animals
will decrease in the ecosystem and it threatens Use synonyms
animals
with extinction.
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Finally
, Linking Words
banned
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banning
zoos
will benefit Use synonyms
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environment
and society in the long run for the simple reason that it will save the Correct article usage
the environment
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animals
rights from Change noun form
animal's
animals'
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zoos
owners. Change the noun form
zoo
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, when there Linking Words
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not
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no
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, the Use synonyms
animals
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use
as business to make money. One clear example is Wrong verb form
be used
abolish make
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abolishing
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the
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apply
zoos
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such
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let
the monkey dance in the circus.
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letting
while
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people
may vary in their opinions, I think that Use synonyms
animals
live In the Use synonyms
environment
and Use synonyms
people
need to respect animal Use synonyms
right
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rights
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