The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing procedure of
bricks
.
Overall
, the linear and man-made process goes through 7 steps with 3 materials, which starts
with digging and ends with delivering.
The process starts with Correct subject-verb agreement
start
digging
of Add an article
the digging
clay
by digger
, after which Correct article usage
a digger
clay
goes through Correct article usage
an apparat
apparat
called Correct your spelling
apparatus
roller
to separate Correct article usage
a roller
clay
from unnecessary particles. At
the third stage, filtered Change preposition
In
clay
mixes with sand and water. After mixing, mixture
Correct article usage
the mixture
cuts
by Wrong verb form
is cut
wire
cutter or gets its figure in moulds. Correct article usage
a wire
Following
this
, bricks
need to be dry
in Replace the word
dried
drying
oven for 24-48 hours.
Add an article
a drying
Next
step is transforming raw Correct article usage
The next
bricks
to
kiln. Change preposition
into
Firstly
on
Change preposition
in
this
phase, raw bricks
need to be under moderate temperature, which is 200-980 degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
, and under high temperature, which Capitalize word
Celsius
is ranges
from 870 to 1300 Change the verb form
ranges
degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
. Phase ends with cooling, which goes in Capitalize word
Celsius
cooling
chamber from 24 to 48 hours. Right after that phase, ready Add an article
the cooling
a cooling
bricks
packages and procedure
ends with delivering Add an article
the procedure
bricks
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