The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

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The line chart describes information about the

percentage

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unemployment

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rate in Australia including urban and rural sites during four quarters.

Overall

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, it is noticeable that both

areas

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experienced some fluctuations. It was

also

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witnessed that

percentage

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unemployment

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rates in rural

areas

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reached highest at the beginning,

however

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, the number of both

areas

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were nearly similar

at the end

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of the

quarter

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. Looking in more detail, the

unemployment

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percentage

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in rural locations stood and reached its highest at over 6%.

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it was followed by a gradual drop until the second

quarter

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and experienced some fluctuations during the two periods. After that, the amount of rate steadily decreased and changed after the end of time. Meanwhile, urban

areas

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began at 2% and significantly rose in the second

quarter

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there was a sharp fall and

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peaked at

peaked

athe

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the

lowest

percentage

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in the third

quarter

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. After that, it continued with dramatic growth and some fluctuations until the fourth

quarter

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Then

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, the

percentage

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unemployment

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rates in urban sites dramatically increased after the

last

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quarter

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, unemployment, areas, quarter with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

172 words

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