The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. 

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The line chart describes information about the
percentage
of
unemployment
rate in Australia including urban and rural sites during four quarters.
Overall
, it is noticeable that both
areas
experienced some fluctuations. It was
also
witnessed that
percentage
unemployment
rates in rural
areas
reached highest at the beginning,
however
, the number of both
areas
were nearly similar
at the end
of the
quarter
. Looking in more detail, the
unemployment
percentage
in rural locations stood and reached its highest at over 6%.
Then
it was followed by a gradual drop until the second
quarter
and experienced some fluctuations during the two periods. After that, the amount of rate steadily decreased and changed after the end of time. Meanwhile, urban
areas
began at 2% and significantly rose in the second
quarter
.
Next,
there was a sharp fall and
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peaked at
peaked
athe
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the
lowest
percentage
in the third
quarter
. After that, it continued with dramatic growth and some fluctuations until the fourth
quarter
.
Then
, the
percentage
of
unemployment
rates in urban sites dramatically increased after the
last
quarter
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, unemployment, areas, quarter with synonyms.
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