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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at museum. Writing a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntery/unpaid work. In your letter . explain why you want to do voluntery/unpaid work at the museum . describe some skills and qualities you have that would be usful . give details of when you would be available for work.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I trust
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 letter finds you well. I am writing to discuss a potential unpaid job opportunity at the museum. Allow me to elaborate on my strategy in response to your proposal.
Firstly
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, I'd like to mention that I've been residing close to your salon and
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 summer I have ample free time as I am a student with no job, prompting me to opt for volunteering at the establishment.
Moreover
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, history is my major at university, and I take pleasure in visiting your museum because I possess a variety of skills. Two years ago, I had to work multiple times daily in order to build my strength.
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, as I mentioned during the summer, I am completely free and live very close to you, which means I can dedicate plenty of time to volunteering at the museum. Even though I don't go to the gym often, I prioritize work as more important if you hire me. Responding to your message in writing. Yours faithfully, Arthur

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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph maintains a single clear idea. For instance, your interest in history could be discussed in a separate paragraph.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples of the skills and qualities you possess that would be useful for the role.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal and polite.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal application, showing respect and interest in the role.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • voluntary work
  • unpaid contribution
  • enthusiastic applicant
  • community enrichment
  • cultural stewardship
  • keen interest
  • meticulous
  • articulate
  • team player
  • customer-oriented
  • education background
  • flexible schedule
  • availability
  • commitment
  • part-time engagement
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