MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates four
countries
of residence of overseas students
in Australia. There are four contries
on the graph : Indonesia, Correct your spelling
countries
Hong
Kong
, Malaysia and Singapore.
Overall
, the number of students
who lived in those countries
generally increased from 1982 to 2000 and the amount of people who stayed in Hong
Kong
was fluctuated
during the given period.
In 1982, no one lived in Indonesia, Change to the active voice
fluctuated
Hong
Kong
and Singapore. Only less than 10,000 students
lived
in Malaysia. But as time went by, the amount of Wrong verb form
live
students
who came to Austraila
from those four Correct your spelling
Australia
countries
gradually increased. In 1998, figure
of Indonesian Add an article
the figure
a figure
students
was around 25,000, the highest record in this
chart. Even though, the number of Indonesian
dropped after 1998, at the
end of the period, Indonesia was the top country among Fix the agreement mistake
Indonesians
of
them. Singapore, Change preposition
apply
Hong
Kong
, Malaysia
were followed next but, these three Correct word choice
and Malaysia
countries
' figure
were similar, Fix the agreement mistake
figures
recorded
approximately 20,000 people.Wrong verb form
recording
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