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MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates four
countries
 of residence of overseas
students
 in Australia. There are four
contries
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countries
 on the graph : Indonesia,
Hong
Kong
, Malaysia and Singapore.
Overall
, the number of
students
 who lived in those
countries
 generally increased from 1982 to 2000 and the amount of people who stayed in
Hong
Kong
was fluctuated
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 during the given period. In 1982, no one lived in Indonesia,
Hong
Kong
 and Singapore. Only less than 10,000
students
lived
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 in Malaysia. But as time went by, the amount of
students
 who came to
Austraila
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Australia
 from those four
countries
 gradually increased. In 1998,
figure
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 of Indonesian
students
 was around 25,000, the highest record in
this
 chart. Even though, the number of
Indonesian
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Indonesians
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 dropped after 1998, at the end of the period, Indonesia was the top country among
of
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them. Singapore,
Hong
Kong
,
Malaysia
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and Malaysia
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 were followed next but, these three
countries
'
figure
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figures
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 were similar,
recorded
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recording
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 approximately 20,000 people.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, students, hong, kong with synonyms.
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