The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map shows the development of the Ryemouth countryside between 1995 and now.

Overall

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, there are some changes by

added

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adding

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restaurant

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restaurants

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, tennis

park

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parks

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apartments

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and apartments

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also

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and also

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removed

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removing

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fishing

port

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ports

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and fish

market

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markets

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. In 1995, the

farm land

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farmland

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was located at the corner of the Ryemouth village's map. But, in the

present

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present,

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the area was changed to be a golf area.

In addition

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, the area

also

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expanded.

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that, there is no more forest park and tennis court was added.

Furthermore

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, the total

houses

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number of houses

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were added too. Beforehand, there are 12 houses. Meanwhile, now

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there is

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Correct subject-verb agreement

are

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more than 12 houses.

Moreover

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, the shop was replaced with the restaurants.

Besides

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, a car park was added precisely beside the hotel.

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the south direction, in 1995 there

were

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was

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fish

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a fish

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market, cafe, sea, and fishing port. Now,

cafe

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cafes

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and

sea

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the sea

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are still in their place.

However

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, there is no fishing port anymore. The spot of

fish

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the fish

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market

also

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changed

become

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to become

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apartments.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

development
infrastructure
land use
residential expansion
modernization effort
commercial
urban development
preserved
recreational areas
transportation infrastructure
eco-friendly
renovation
transformation
bike paths
car park
establishment

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