The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The map shows the development of the Ryemouth countryside between 1995 and now.

Overall

, there are some changes by

added

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adding

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restaurant

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restaurants

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, tennis

park

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parks

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apartments

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and apartments

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also

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and also

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removed

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removing

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fishing

port

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ports

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and fish

market

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markets

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. In 1995, the

farm land

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farmland

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was located at the corner of the Ryemouth village's map. But, in the

present

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present,

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the area was changed to be a golf area.

In addition

, the area

also

expanded.

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that, there is no more forest park and tennis court was added.

Furthermore

, the total

houses

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number of houses

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were added too. Beforehand, there are 12 houses. Meanwhile, now

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there is

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are

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more than 12 houses.

Moreover

, the shop was replaced with the restaurants.

Besides

, a car park was added precisely beside the hotel.

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the south direction, in 1995 there

were

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was

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fish

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a fish

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market, cafe, sea, and fishing port. Now,

cafe

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cafes

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and

sea

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the sea

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are still in their place.

However

, there is no fishing port anymore. The spot of

fish

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the fish

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market

also

changed

become

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to become

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apartments.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

155 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do advantage of this development outweigh this disadvantages.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+