The diagram below shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The illustration shows the explanation of new features and layout changes in the current
library
floor plan.
First and foremost, the planners propose to remove the tables and chairs from the middle of the library
. This
will mean ballooning the amount of free space for movement
of customers. Correct article usage
the movement
Next,
the user needs were installed namely, information desk, cafe, self-service
machines. Correct word choice
and self-service
Moreover
, the only unchanged adult fiction book area was relocated to the back side of new
lecture room.
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the new
a new
In addition
to measures
above, Correct article usage
the measures
Public
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the Public
library
got over
significant digitalization, Verb problem
underwent
brand new
computer room was constructed for Replace the word
and a brand-new
this
purpose.
In a nutshell, under these proposals, the needs of local residents will be better served by making Central Library
a safer and more pleasant environment.Submitted by Umar on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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