Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, more and more

people

believe that a competitive situation is beneficial for

societies

, in terms of professional, educational, and daily routines. Meanwhile, the

remainders

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prefer to uphold cooperation

instead

of facing a lot of competition

everyday

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.

Although

being cooperative in any

circumstances

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is a good thing, a

strongly-competitive

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background will encourage one's motivation to provide a better performance compared to

the

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others. On the one hand, it is good to have

a cooperative surroundings

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a cooperative surrounding

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, both in professional

lives

or

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and

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daily

lives

. In fact,

such

conditions can minimize conflicts from happening between others and may reduce tensions among teamwork.

Therefore

,

societies

believe that

this

kind of situation can make

people

work or act together simultaneously, in order to achieve common goals.

However

, if

people

uphold cooperation too much in their

lives

, there are chances for several individuals to become somewhat less motivated since there are bigger chances of too much tolerance in their surroundings.

For example

, during group assignments

at

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class, some children have less courage to do their roles properly

due to

having a thought that their friends will cover the work

at the end

.

In contrast

,

a

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competitive circumstances can lead to make everyone in

societies

having a motivation to outperform each other.

In other words

, each individual will make the most of their

performances

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in order to achieve the best results

while

doing their jobs, school assignments, or working for

societies

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society

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.

As a result

,

this

will

also

lead to a better quality of outcome, compared to those with less courage. In handling a project at a company,

for instance

, workers who compete against their colleagues will put their maximum effort

to finish

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the project on time in order to get a bonus, since there will be only one "employee of the year" in each period who will receive

such

a

high-level

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of appreciation. In conclusion, it is true that a cooperative environment will make

people

to

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live with less conflict and greater

opportunity

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opportunities

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to work side-by-side

in achieving

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to achieve

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common objectives. Having a competitive surrounding,

however

, can increase

people

's motivation and may encourage them to deliver their best performance in doing their tasks in daily

lives

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life

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.