The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the data about the population from four Asian
countries
, the
Philippines
,
Malaysia
, Thailand and
Indonesia
, living in
cities
from the
year
1970 to 2020,
along with
further
predictions for another 20 years, i.e., 2030 and 2040. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, the
Philippines
had the highest number of population residing in
cities
in the initial
year
of 1970,
whereas
,
Indonesia
had the lowest number of
people
living in
cities
.
Also
, the data of
people
from
Malaysia
living in
cities
was almost similar to the
Philipinnes
Correct your spelling
Philippines
. The data from the
year
1970 to 1980 indicates two
countries
,
Malaysia
and the
Philippines
to be the highest in terms of 30%
people
living in
cities
,
while
Thailand and
Indonesia
had about 15% and 18%
people
occupying the
cities
. From the beginning of the
year
1990 there was a drastic rise in
Malaysia
, more than 45% of the population occupied the
cities
which was the highest among all four
countries
,
however
a small fall in percentage was noted in the
Philippines
in the same
year
. The predictions for the next 20 years regarding
people
living in
cities
(2030 and 2040) were marked with a rise of approximately 35% and 40% in
Indonesia
,
moreover
, no down trend is allocated to any of the
countries
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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