The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions.

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The table depicts the number of viewers for four genres of movies in four different countries, in millions.

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, action flicks were the most viewed in each country and horror films were the least.

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, India had the highest viewership out of all of the countries,

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Japan had the least.

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, more violent productions were viewed almost twice as often as horror pictures, with 29.9 compared to 15.8 in attendance.

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, thrillers were the most popular in each country, totalling above 7 million viewers each. Turning to romance and comedy, they reported 20.3 and 19.9 attendees, respectively. These categories were significantly less popular than action in every nation, except India where only a 500,000 viewership decrease was seen in the romance category. Total cinema visits were highest in India at 24.5 million.

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was compared to 23.3 in Ireland, in the

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and 20.3 in New Zealand, in the third.

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, 17.8 people went to movie theatres in Japan.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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