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The graph below shows average CO2 emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average CO2 emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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The given line chart illustrates how much carbon dioxide
emissions
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 per individual emit in 4 countries including the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of 40 years starting from 1967. As an overview,
it is clear that
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 the amount of CO2 output that was emitted in the UK and Sweden showed a reduction.
Whereas
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, the figure for
this
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 emission experienced an upward trend in two other countries. Looking at the graph, citizens released about 1 and over 4
tonnes
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 in Italy and Portugal respectively in 1967. After 30 years, the survey witnessed that the amount of CO2
emissions
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 that Italians emitted rocketed to approximately 8
tonnes
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, followed by just over 5
tonnes
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 in Portugal. CO2
emissions
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 in Italy remained stable from 1997 to 2007. Meanwhile, these
emissions
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 which Portugal citizens produced rose slightly by 0,25
tonnes
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 between 1997 and 2007.
On the other hand
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, the figure for CO2
emissions
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 which the UK released decreased moderately by 2
tonnes
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 throughout the survey period.
While
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 the statistic for CO2
emissions
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 in Sweden stood at just under 9
tonnes
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 in 1967, it went up to over 10
tonnes
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 10 years later. During the remaining time, it declined sharply to roughly 6
tonnes
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.
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