The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?

The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?
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two tables depict different sides on various sides of urban life in a specific city in the years
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1980 and 2010. It is noticeable that in both two years, the positive
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on six aspects (education, healthcare, environment, shops, employment, and
transport
) were out way of the negative
reviews
. The bad
reviews
of entire aspects had risen. In the year 2000, healthcare had the highest positive feedback, at 82%,
while
by 2010, good opinions of healthcare had dropped to 74%, and had been replaced by education with 82%. Good
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environments
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, shops and
transport
had descended from 1980 to 2010, especially the
reviews
of
transport
, which had been
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down from 52% to 39%. It is remarkable that
transport
had the highest criticisms not only in 1980 at 32% but in 2010 at 38%, nearly the same proportion as the positive opinions and four times higher than bad
reviews
of education at 9%. In 1980, bad
reviews
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took 6%
whereas
shops doubled at 12%,
however
, by 2010, the result has arrived at the same with 16%. The result of neither good nor bad on employment aspect had declined most, from 22% in 1980 to 5% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, reviews with synonyms.
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