Due to the effect of globalization, the culture of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a natural process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. What is your opinion about this?

There are those who believe that

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globalization is a phenomenon that

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affected the

culture

around the

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world

and it is

threating

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threatening

treating

the

culture

identity

. Some argue that

this

change in

culture

part

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of a natural process. I believe, that

this

process is nurturing the

culture

,

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is

part

of evolution and not necessarily

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a bad

influenced

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on

peoples

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people's

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identity

. On the one hand, is argued that cultural expansion is going to erase or transform

peoples

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people's

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cultural

identity

. With the mix of beliefs, experiences and practices a different

culture

will be born, and the old customs will be left behind. It is really difficult to control

this

exchange of cultures in a

globalizated

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globalised

world. Nowadays, everyone and everything is linked in

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way or another. It is inevitable that cultural exchange

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happens

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through

lenguages

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languages

language

,

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cuisine

, traditions,

travels

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, and so on.

However

, I do not believe that

this

will transform the

essense

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essence

of a

culture

. It is more practical to see it as

part

of a cultural evolution.

On the other hand

, cultural mix is

part

of a natural evolution.

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identity

can

be define

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or

understand

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as a mix of beliefs, customs,

lenguage

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language

, religion, tradition,

celebrations

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and celebrations

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,

for

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name a few.

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are

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part

of the DNA of people, in a figurative way.

Additionally

,

this

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characteristics are the

differencial

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different

factor

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factors

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of each group.

For instance

,

latin

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people can be

recongnaized

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recognised

for their

lenguage

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language

, their food and their own history. The same will happen with each country.

This

does not mean that

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cultures can not be mixed in different scenarios like art,

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cuisine

and celebrations. to

conlude

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conclude

, I believe that cultural exchange is

part

of the

naural

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natural

course of humanity.

This

is

a

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advantage for society.

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and

nurture

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nurturing

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the

cultura

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culture

and knowledge will always bring a

positve

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positive

outcome for society.