The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table illustrates the number of kids ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia in the
year
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1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006. The units of
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are given in percentages.
Overall
, in all
the
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four years,
high
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a high
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percentage of deliveries was witnessed in
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of two
children
whereas
low cases were witnessed in
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of one child except in one
year
that had the lowest
birth
in four or more
children
. First of all, women delivered two
children
the most in all the years.
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1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006 had 38.3%, 38.2%, 35.6% and 29.0 per cent respectively.
Furthermore
, low figures were observed in the
birth
of one child in 1996, 1986 and 1981 which had 11.3%, 8.7% and 7.6% respectively. In the
year
2006, the low cases were shown in
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of four or more
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children
which had 11.0 per cent.
Nonetheless
, the high number of
children
born had an upward turn from 1981 with 29.0% to 2006 where 38.3 figure was recorded.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, birth, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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