The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table illustrates the number of kids ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia in the
year
1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006. The units of Fix the agreement mistake
years
measurements
are given in percentages.
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measurement
Overall
, in all the
four years, Correct article usage
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high
percentage of deliveries was witnessed in Add an article
a high
birth
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the birth
children
whereas
low cases were witnessed in birth
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the birth
year
that had the lowest birth
in four or more children
.
First of all, women delivered two children
the most in all the years. For instance
, in the year
1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006 had 38.3%, 38.2%, 35.6% and 29.0 per cent respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Furthermore
, low figures were observed in the birth
of one child in 1996, 1986 and 1981 which had 11.3%, 8.7% and 7.6% respectively. In the year
2006, the low cases were shown in birth
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the birth
childern
which had 11.0 per cent.
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children
Nonetheless
, the high number of children
born had an upward turn from 1981 with 29.0% to 2006 where 38.3 figure was recorded.Submitted by janenjeru6 on
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