The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.
The table illustrates the
patients
ratings of various medical facilities in Change the noun form
patient
Longston
Centre
, Peveril
Centre
, and Marchbank
Centre
.
Overall
, it can be observed that Marchbank
Centre
excels in providing the
health services Correct article usage
apply
while
Peveril
Centre
trails behind at second
stop and Correct article usage
the second
Longston
Centre
is the last
.
When it comes to booking appointments, the patients gave approval points of 5.2, 9.1, and 7.8 for Longston
Centre
, Peveril
Centre
and Marchbank
Centre
respectively. Both Peveril
Centre
and Marchbank
Centre
receive above 7 when it comes to child care but Longston
remains slightly below at 6.3. The Peveril
Centre
asserts complete dominace
with respect to public support score, soaring up to 9.6, the highest compared to Correct your spelling
dominance
it's
peers, where Replace the word
its
Longston
centre
remains the lowest at 4.3 Capitalize word
Centre
while
Marchbank
at
6.5.
Add a missing verb
is at
Although
the Longston
Centre
fails to compete effectively in almost all the health domains, however
the Add the comma(s)
however,
performace
of doctors here remains satisfactory, Correct your spelling
performance
although
lower than it's
competitors, scoring 8 points is Correct your spelling
its
an
considerable achievement.Change the article
a
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