The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given two line charts compare data about the changes in ownership of electrical devices and the
time
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that people spent doing housework in
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country from 1920 to 2019.
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, the proportion of electrical tools bought increased, and the number of
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that people spent at house declined.
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the plot showing the percentage of electrical appliances, Washing machines, were the first thing that the population bought, a 40% in 1920;
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the trend climbed slightly to nearly 75% in 2019 and reached the third level. The second
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was Vacuum cleaners, which had 30% at the beginning, and went up moderately to 100% in 2000 which was the same as in 2019. Refrigerators, were the third
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, at the start had 0% . Later line had a massive jump to 100% in 1960, after that line was constant until 2019 and was equal to the
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one
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. The graph of
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demonstrates inhabitants of
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country when they had electrical equipment did not spend a lot of
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on housework because the figure for hours in 1920, was 50;
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, it reduced fractionally to 10 in the final year.
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