Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •suggest a suitable date and time for the party •recommend a venue •propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.
#manager #party #colleague #company #•suggest #date #time #•recommend #venue #•propose #food #entertainment #options
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about one of our new employees.
I am Sam, currently working as a Software Developer in the Technology Department one of the world's most prestigious companies. Recently, I had a terrible experience with our new employee. In addition
, when I provided some project-related tasks to him, he could not deliver the task before the deadline. Apart from that, he also
misbehaves with our female employees.
Furthermore
, when I shared these experiences with other colleagues who were working in my team. They also
felt the same way that I experienced previously. Moreover
, when I spoke with female employees, they expressed that he was sex torture which made us feel uncomfortable working in this
office environment.
Finally
, I would like to provide some suggestions to take action against him. First,
collect his work performance records. So, if he was performing poorly then
we can provide him a
Add the preposition
with a
poor quality
performance letter. Add a hyphen
poor-quality
Second,
collect some feedback of that worker from our people. Especially, from the female workers. Therefore
, it will provide a piece of evidence for us to terminate him from this
esteemed organisation.
I hope you can understand the situation and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
SamSubmitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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Tone & Content
Try to avoid making serious accusations without clear evidence or investigation, and ensure your letter maintains a respectful and professional tone.
Task Achievement
Provide specific examples or incidents to substantiate the claims made in your letter. This will make your complaints more credible.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider structuring your letter with clear paragraphs for introduction, main content, and conclusion to enhance readability.
Coherent Plan
You effectively outlined a structured action plan to address the concerns raised.
Task Achievement
Your letter successfully includes all requested components: identifying the issue, discussing its impact, and suggesting solutions.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite